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Below you will find many examples of writing in English which contain grammatical errors. These errors are highlighted in yellow so that you can spot them easily. The complete, corrected text appears underneath.
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Use the table below and write at least 1 - 3 paragraphs (5 sentences in each paragraph / at least 300 characters total) in an essay about any of the following topics. The first paragraph should be the introduction, then write body paragraphs where you give supporting details about your topic, and the last paragraph should be the conclusion where you summarize your ideas and give an opinion or piece of advice. This is a standard format for writing in English.
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Descriptive |
Opinion |
Narrative |
Process |
Beginner |
1.) What are some important sites to see in your home country? Give descriptions and details about the places. Include history and other interesting facts to support your ideas. or 2.) Describe the perfect day. What happens during that day? Where do you go? What do you see? Who are you with? What do you do? |
3.) Where is the best country to visit? Explain what that country has and what sites you can see there. Why is it a good place to visit? or 4.) What is the best movie? Why is it good? Why should people see it? Who is in the movie? What happens in the movie?
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5.) Who is your hero and why? What has that person done? Give details about that person’s life and write about why you admire that person. or 6.) Give an introduction about yourself. Where do you work? What are your hobbies? Where are you from? Are you married, single, etc.?
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7.) Write an essay about “how to _________”. For example, you can write a 3-paragraph essay about “how to fix a car”, “how to cook spaghetti”, or “how to dance salsa”. |
Intermediate |
8.) Describe the first house in which you lived. What did it look like? What did it smell like? What did it feel like? Give some specific details about the house that you remember. or 9.) Describe a memory from your childhood. What happened? Why do you still remember it? Why is it important to you? How did you feel? What did you think?
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10.) Is the world a better or worse place because of technology? Give reasons to support your opinions. Give examples of modern technology and how it affects humans. or 11.) Should guns be legal? Give support to your arguments. Talk about how guns affect people and a country’s crime rates. |
12.) Which was your favorite birthday or holiday? Tell a story about the past. What happened on that day? Why was it special to you? Who was involved in your special day? or 13.) Where do you see yourself in five years? What will you be doing? Where will you live? What will your life be like? What are your goals for the future? |
14.) Write a 4-paragraph essay about “how to ________”. For example, “how to learn a language”, “how to be a good person” or “how to be financially responsible”. |
Advanced |
15.) Explain art. What is it? What does it mean to see something artistic or to be artistic? What are the different types of art? Does everyone view art the same? Give details to support your ideas. |
16.) Is war necessary? Write your opinions about wars and how they have affected humans across history. Give specific examples of war situations and provide support for your opinions. |
17.) If you were somebody else, who would you be and why? What would your life be like as that other person? How would it be different from your life now? Give details about what would happen to you if you were another person. |
18.) Write a 5-paragraph essay about “how to _________”. For example, “how to solve world hunger”, “how to protect the environment” or “how to stop racism”. |
Beginner Writings
Trang Quynh is a good comic book for everyone, especially children to read. The goal is teaching young people do the right things. Quynh is the main character is very kind and intelligent. It makes everyone happy, as well as teaching more life lessons so it's good book for reading. First of all, the book has more short stories so people won't feel bored and tired when reading. Additionally, you will find more lessons about behaving with other people on your own and can apply to your life. Finally, this comic book is rather simple and lively, not too complex so you will be relaxed and comfortable when reading. You can learn and relaxed from this comic book. I read it everyday, and do you like it ? |
Trang Quynh is a good comic book for everyone to read, especially children. The goal is teaching young people to do the right things. Quynh is the main character and is very kind and intelligent. It makes everyone happy, as well as teaches many life lessons, so it's a good book for reading. First of all, the book has many short stories so people won't feel bored and tired when reading. Additionally, you will find many lessons about behaving with other people on your own and can apply them to your life. Finally, this comic book is rather simple and lively, not too complex so you will be relaxed and comfortable when reading. You can learn and relax from this comic book. I read it every day, and I hope you will like it, too. |
In five years i see myself as a event company owner because i love organizing events and have worked formany diffferent event companies, i know the in and out of that business.so in five years will be a sucessful event company owner As a teen have always seen myself driving a audi living in bedford view with my two beautiful kids and husband,hapily maried.l will be a queen and sucessful 2020 will be the sucessful business woman around africa wanna shine and travel the world |
In five years, I see myself as an event company owner because I love organizing events and have worked for many different event companies. I know the ins and outs of that business. So, in five years, I will be a successful event company owner. As a teen, I always saw myself driving an Audi and living in Bedford. I imagined myself with two beautiful kids and happily married to a husband. I will be a queen and successful in 2020. I will be the successful business woman around Africa. I want to shine and travel the world. |
War is very dangerous but sometimes it's be very important . In my opinion these war is used to defense the nation and protect peoples of occupation forces .No one denies it has affected a human and it had led to break down a society and destruction a lot of people's life . I wish peoples would stop fight and world lives in peace . |
War is very dangerous, but sometimes it's very important. In my opinion, these wars are used to defend the nation and protect people of occupational forces. No one denies it has affected humans and it has led to a breakdown of society and destruction of a lot of people's lives. I wish people would stop fighting and the world would live in peace. |
I'd prefer English movie . the best movie in my view called "Just Like Heaven" . That's not English but it's Spain movie. It's very exciting for me . people should be see that movie because it's a nice and too romantic movie . it was show strong relationship between loves . it has got osscar . it's block buster movie . in the end i would see another romantic movie at the same stander of this movie nearly . |
I prefer English movies. The best movie in my view is called "Just Like Heaven". That's not in English, but it's a Spanish movie. It's very exciting for me. People should see that movie because it's a nice and very romantic movie. It shows a strong relationship between lovers. It won an Oscar. It's a blockbuster movie. In the end, I would see another romantic movie at nearly the same standard as this movie. |
Just like any other person
lived on earth but each one with a
unique way of living Douglas
Adams was one of the people who inspired me most. He was born in one of the
remote areas of the country, raised by a single parent went attended primary school at a community school
,his mother dead when he was 17. He dropped out of school to look for a
job to meet his daily needs. He started a small business which with time grew, he raised money to pay
for school .He graduated as a lawyer from the university of Zambia. Despite all the hardship he faced in his life he still raised above them and
made a difference in life. |
Just like any other person who lived on earth in a unique way of living,
Douglas Adams was one of the people who inspired me most. He was born in one of
the remote areas of the country, raised by a single parent. He attended a
public primary school and his mother died when he was 17. He dropped out of
school to look for a job to meet his daily needs. He started a small business, which
with time, grew. He raised money to pay for school. He graduated as a lawyer
from the University of Zambia. Despite all the hardships he faced in his life,
he still rose above them and made a difference in life. |
Mijo, you have better choices in this life. That were the words tha
my father told me when i used to be realated to a gang. I was always fighting with others gangs members and getting
in trouble evry day |
Mijo, you have better choices in this life. Those
were the words that my father told me when I used to be involved in a gang. I
was always fighting with other gang members and getting in trouble every day at
school. One day, he wanted to talk to me about life and the risk of doing bad
things breaking the law. He told me that I was not like them and that he was so
sad to see his champion fighting. Those words made me leave that gang I was a
part of and start doing well in school. Now, I am a welder. I have a good job
and a beautiful wife and daughter who are my world. Most of those people who
were supposed to be my friends are in jail. Some of them are dead because of
the gang. That's why I call my father my hero. He had the courage to talk to me
and told me a lot of good and bad things about life. He will always be my hero.
He is the best father to me. |
My cauntry is Italy,It
is beatyfuul |
My country is Italy. It is
beautiful. I love it. My country has rich history and culture. A person can see
this in many cities and many places. My country is very good for vacation and
the food is delicious. Today, my daughter and I went downtown. It was a nice
day. We went shopping, then we ate at an Italian restaurant. We went walking by
the lakeshore. For us, it was very nice. |
The perfect day |
In my opinion, the perfect day depends on several conditions. The first condition is the time and the weather. A sunny day and a rainy day may trace different effects in our minds. The second condition is the people what we spend our time with. Funny people will make a funny day and sad people will leave a sad effect in our minds. |
An intersting place in my country, will be a excelent beach, call Playa El Tunco. Wich is in La Libertad is not so far fron the city, San San salvador. It only take like 20 or 25 minutes to get there. There are a lot of turist fron every coutry, most of them are from Canada or USA. There is a big rock with a form of a pig, I know, its crazy, butif you have imagination you will see the pig, when i go there i love some place call; Monkey lala, its very hippie trend place, there is a poll where you can swim and there is open to walk in the beach, very private. |
An interesting place in my country is an excellent beach called Playa El Tunco. It is in La Libertad, which is not far from the city San Salvador. It only takes 20 or 25 minutes to get there. There are a lot of tourists from every country. Most of them are from Canada or the USA. There is a big rock with the form of a pig. I know, it's crazy, but if you have an imagination, you will see the pig. When I got there, I love a place called Monkey Lala. It's very hippy and trendy. There is a pool where you can swim and it is open to walk to the beach. It is also very private. |
Cooking pasta is my
specialty and, I
love to try different kind
with different sauces but,
my favorite is spaghetti. |
Cooking pasta is my
specialty and I love to try different kinds with different sauces, but my
favorite is spaghetti. I always use the best brand of spaghetti. I use a big
pot because all of my family loves it. I cook the spaghetti according to the
box instructions. My spaghetti is ready after boiling for 15 minutes. I strain
it, place it in another bowl, add butter and parmesan cheese, and it is ready
to be served. |
my
first house was small, yet
only was to me, it look
like old very old previously this place was
a monastery thence
there are a lot of
rooms. |
My first house was small, even though I lived alone. It looked very old. Previously, this place was a monastery, so there were a lot of rooms. I liked this place because, when I lived alone, I had more privacy and that is important for studying. There was more concentration, no distractions and I was able to be more responsible and do a lot of things. |
Hello. My name is Mohigul. I am
from Uzbekistan. I came in United States
about six years ago with my parents. In 2010 I
got married. I have 2 boys now. My first
son start to go to the school. It's very different for him now.
America is the free country. I am very
happy and very enjoy this country. But, sometime I want to go back to my country
because my all relatives are there. My
grandmother also lives in Uzbekistan. |
Hello. My name is Mohigul. I am
from Uzbekistan. I came to the United States about six years ago with my
parents. In 2010, I got married. I have two boys now. My first son started to
go to school. It's very different for him now. American is a free country. I am
very happy and really enjoy this country. But, sometimes I want to go back to
my country because all my relatives are there. My grandmother also lives in
Uzbekistan. |
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Culture is one characteristic of a country. Many countries in the world have different cultures. In Indonesia, there are many cultures that happen in society caused by ethnic diversity in Indonesia. Indonesia has some ethnicities. These ethnicities are Jawa, Sunda, Dayak, Ambon, Madura, Melayu, Batak, Betawi and more. The most popular ethnicity in Indonesia is Jawa. Indonesia's largest population is on the island of Java. There are many tribal cultures that have developed in Java. The most unique aspect of their culture is etiquette and grammar. In the Java ethnicity, when someone speaks with another person, one must use etiquette. When someone speaks with someone else, he/she should be able to distinguish the manners to talk to older people. For example, the word "you" in the grammar of Java has several levels. Starting from the bottom, they are koe, sampean, and panjenengan. The word "koe" is used for the pronoun "you" by younger people or usually used in informal contexts. The word "sampean" is used by a younger person in an official context. While the word "penjenengan" is used by the elderly or by people who are respected in the formal context. Cultural grammar in Java is different from grammar in general, but it indicates the teaching of manners or courtesy in speaking with people so as to create an environment of mutual respect. |
It was a sunny day. The sun was shinning brightly and there was no windy at all. The natural
atmosphere was very tranquil and peaceful. |
It was a sunny day. The sun was shining brightly and there was no wind at all. The natural atmosphere was very tranquil and peaceful. My family was getting ready to go to a picnic on a nearby island. They gathered ranges of food items and other useful materials, which we needed at the event. We all went to the harbor by a pickup and immediately got in the speedboat. After we traveled one and half hours, we reached the picnic island safely. The island was very good look and the ambiance on the island was attractive with greenish trees. Many species of birds were chirping and schools of fish were moving from hither and thither in the fishpond. I was astonished and shocked by the perfection of the island. We had stayed on the island for five days. We had a lot of fun with each other and also, every evening, we all went to the beach to play beach volleyball. After that, we swam in the swimming pool. |
I come from Maldives. Maldives is famous on tourist destination in the world.
there are few important sites in capital city known as
Male to attract tourists, such as republic square, national musician, art gallery. |
I come from Maldives. Maldives is a famous tourist destination in the world. There are a few important sites in the capital city, known as Male, to attract tourists, such as the Republic Square, the National Museum, and the art gallery. The Republic Square is a place, which is located in front of the police headquarters and the defense headquarters. In the evening, many people always go to the Republic Square with their children for entertainment and to get fresh, natural air. The main harbor is also located near the Republic Square. There is a very big, national flag located in that place as well in order to show that our country is an independent country. The National Museum is a place to protect historical items. There are many historical items that are preserved and kept on display for the tourists. The art gallery is a place, which preserves historical drawings and books and gives people interesting information about them. Many tourists are attracted to those places to visit and get information. |
I knew
on my husband since
1990. We have lived
on the same street, in
our country. We had in relationship for 2 years, then he came in USA. |
I have known my husband since 1990. We lived on the same street in our country. We had a relationship for two years, then he came to the USA. We reconnected our relationship through Facebook. Then, he came to Bucharest and we spent a few days together. We have been in love since high school. In April, 2013, we went to Barcelona on vacation. In June, I got a visa and I came to the USA for six months. My husband is a handsome man, careful with me, non-violent and we hope to have a child, because these things would be great for us. I love him and I’m so happy with my husband. I am sure our relationship is real. I want to work. I’m looking for a job. I filled out some applications and I will have an interview on Friday, the 16th. I hope now things will be favorable and we will not have any problems. |
I am Mirela. I have 40 and live in Miami, USA. I was born in Romania. Mother's name is Liliana and father's name is Nicolae. |
I am Mirela. I am 40 and live in Miami, FL. I was born in Romania. My mother.s name is Liliana and my father.s name is Nicolae. I have lived in the USA since March, 2014. Emil is my husband. Emil and I got married on September 5th. Soon we will have an immigration interview and I am scared because I don.t speak fluent English. I am trying to learn English by myself, but I need communication. In January, I started one English course at Broward School. I go to school every day from 5 to 9pm. I will try to learn English so I can go to work. I need some money for my health and living expenses. I was a teacher in my country. I didn.t earn much money, but I had more professional satisfaction. I like to work with children. I have a son. He is 10 years old. now, my son is living in our country, Romania, with his father, my former husband. I hope you try to help me with my English. All the best. |
When I was
child, I lived with my parent and I felt happy with them. In that time, I had many
memories ith many
friends and relative,
especially with my father when we played "Chocobo Racing" together. |
When I was a child, I lived with my parents and I felt happy with them. In that time, I had many memories with many friends and relatives, especially with my father when we played “Chocobo Racing” together. I was the period of time when I had my birthday. My father had bought a PS1 and gave it to me. After the party, we opened the presents and then he gave me a surprise. It was an electronic machine I had dreamed about. We prepared carefully everything and connected it to the TV so that we could play advantageously. Everything seemed to be alright. We started the game to find the winner. I still remember the happy face of my father when he played with me. It seemed as if he were a child; no thinking, no worrying about anything. He was unaffected so that my mother got angry with his childishness. He is all that I have. He is a good father as well as a wonderful husband. It is surprisingly easy for people to become adults, but it is pretty hard to keep a child-like heart that just enjoys life. That part of him made him an admirable father. |
This is a really interesting statement, also lets people to think deeply. Children
should play sports only for fun, and they don.t need to attend competitions.
Nowadays, I would like to agree
this statement. I will list some reasons for others who keep the
opposite attitude. |
Children should play sports only for fun, and they don’t need to attend competitions. Nowadays, I would like to agree with this statement. I will list some reasons for others who keep the opposite attitude. |
Someone said that students are more interested in politics
today than they were in the past. Many people will think that students still like a child, they do not
really care about the
polices. Only
students whose major relate
on polity may give more attention on it. In my opinion, it is true that there are many students
interested in politics. I will list some reasons as follows. |
Someone said that students are more interested in politics today than they were in the past. Many people will think that students are still like children. They do not really care about politics. Only students whose major relates to politics may give more attention to it. In my opinion, many students are interested in politics. I will list some reasons as follows. |
China is an enormous country with long histories. Many building and landscapes
are worth for
visiting. If a foreign visitor only had one day to see our country, I would strongly recommend that BeiJing, the capital of China, is the representative of our
country. I am going to list some reasons as follows. |
China is an enormous country with a long history. Many buildings and landscapes are worth visiting. If a foreign visitor only had one day to see our country, I would strongly recommend that he/she visit Beijing, the capital of China. I am going to list some reasons as follows. |
Progress is the natural law. Our live depended on progress. Everything is going to better and more convenient. As my consideration, Progress is really important for the people. There are some reasons will list as follows. |
Progress is the natural law. Our lives depend on progress. Everything is going to be better and more convenient. In my opinion, progress is really important for people. I will list some reasons. |
My favorite holiday is 31 May 2014. Because it the first day i went to Australia alone and the first time for me. I felt excited . And when i'm here in Australia . I felt good and excited . Everything when you seen the first time it's so cool. I had seen different place,different people and different culture. I lived in NSW far from sydney around 30 minutes by ferry. It's near the beach . everyday when my school finished i had to walk to the beach with my friends. It's very beautiful |
My favorite holiday is May 31st, 2014, because it was the first time I went to Australia, and I was alone. I felt excited, and when I’m there in Austraila, I felt good. Everything is cool when you see it for the first time. I had seen different laces, different people, and different cultures. I lived in NSW, far from Sydney, around 30 minutes by ferry. It’s near the beach. Every day when my school finished, I walked to the beach with my friends. It’s very beautiful. |
My childhood:I was a very poor child,but it was beautiful because i had a big family,Mom and Dad they work very hard to gave as something to eat and to put on as.We wore 11 brothers and sisters we never had pop or tropical fruits we had a big garden full of trees,grapes,lot of vegetables,we had a form and just like dad we had and learn haw we have to deal with our life |
In my childhood, I was a very poor child, but my life was beautiful because I had a big family. My mom and dad worked very hard to give us something to eat and clothes to wear. There were 11 children in my family. We never had pop or tropical fruits. We had a big garden full of trees, grapes, and lots of vegetables. We had a farm. Just like my dad, we had to learn how to deal with our life. |
My home country India.The name shows very smart.Here Bangalore and Mysore are very good place.Mysore is famous for palace,dam,Garden and very comfirtabal tolive.Bangalore is also garden city and famous for I.T.SO many companies come here to work and give works to youngesters. For visiting purphose Dhely our capital is famous for Gate way of India. |
My home country is India. The name means “very smart”. Here, Bangalore and Mysore are very good places. Mysore is famous for its palace, dam, garden and it is very comfortable to live in. Bangalore is also a garden city and is famous for I.T.SO. Many companies come here to work and give jobs to youngsters. For visiting purposes, Delhi, our capital, is famous for the Gateway of India. I hope you can visit Indian someday. |
In my opinion, the best kind of a movie is fiction. I have seen many movies in my life. One of them is Iron Man 3. I going to see Iron Main 4 tomorrownight. |
In my opinion, the best kind of movie is fiction. I have seen many movies in my life. One of them was Iron Man 3. I am going to see Iron Man 4 tomorrow night. |
Antarctica was discovered in 1820, this was claim of many groups, who claims themselves were the first group that achieved and found Antarctica. |
Antarctica was discovered in 1820. Many groups claimed to be the first ground to discover and found Antarctica. The first of all groups was a Russian group. It is noted that the geography of the shore of Antarctica was unknown until the 19th century. Vilchz, an officer of the U.S. navy, properly claimed that Antarctica was a new continent. He tried to sail along the Antarctic Sea from 1839 to 1843, but he wasn’t successful. |
My name is Aung Min Swe.I am 23 years old.I am male.I live in Union of public of Myanmar.My native town is Yangon.I graduated from a university .I would like to become a doctor.But I could not be .Now I'm working at a company.In which I work as a clerk. |
My name is Aung Min Swe. I am 23 years old. I am male. I live in the Republic of the Union of Myanmar. My native town is Yangon. I graduated from a university. I would like to become a doctor, but I cannot because I am working in a company as a clerk. |
THE TOPIC THAT I HAVE TO EXPLANE IS WAR AND ITS AFFECT ON HUMANS CAUSE OF WAR . WAR IS NOT NECESSORY BECause it spread un prosperity also mind peace creat lots of disturbince it also influnce economy and agriculture also alot of annocent were die in fast there were so many war were faught but it cause totally lose to both side. war is not the to solve all the problems some time it is more important to sit and talk on issues and get the possible solution for the problem. |
The topic that I have to explain is war and its effect on humans. War is not necessary because it destroys prosperity and peace of mind. It creates lots of disturbances and it influences the economy and agriculture. Also, a lot of innocent people die fast. There have been so many wars, but they cause total loss to both sides. War is not the solution to all the problems. Sometimes, it is more important to sit and talk about issues and get the possible solution for the problem. |
Hi my name is sikandar farman khan i am 22 year old i am a student at engeenering university atr abbotabad and studing telecom engeenering.i belong to swat pakistan and my home town is wainay swat.i like to play football cricket i also like to watch historical movies and listen classic music i love to learn new thing and to explore the nature and enjoyaing to learn english language.i am single |
Hi. My name is Sikandar Farman Khan. I am 22 years old and I am single. I am a student at an engineering university in Abbotabad and I am studying telecommunications engineering. I belong to Swat Pakistan and my hometown is Wainay Swat. I like to play football and cricket. I also like to watch historical movies and listen to classical music. I love to learn new things and to explore nature. I enjoy learning English. |
There is Eiffel tower in Paris, in the Mars square, next to Seine river. It made by metal and today it known as French symbol. This tower is one of the most known places in the world and it has a lot of visitors in a day, which they come there from other countries. |
The Eiffel Tower is in Paris, in the Mars Square, next to the Seine River. It was made by metal and today it is known as a French symbol. This tower is one of the most known places in the world and it has a lot of visitors in a day who come from other countries. The tower was built in 1887, and in 1889, it was ready to use. At first, it was an international symbol for the 100th anniversary of the French revolution, but it wasn’t accepted by all people. Three hundred people such as Zolla, Garnie, and Mopasan severely protested the making of the tower. It took two and a half years to build the Eiffel Tower. It weighs ten thousand tons and seven thousand tons of it is steel. The name of the tower came from its maker, Gostay Eiffel. It is beautiful and you can visit it, and the Seine River, at the same time and enjoy them. |
In my city there is 3 big area that have water like small lake. We say them Chah Nime. they are sources of drinking and agriculture water. also there is fish in them and pepole hunt them. people go to the shore of CH at vacation and eat lunch. |
In my city, there are three big areas that have water like small lakes. They are called Chah Nime. They are sources of drinking and agricultural water. Also, there are fish in them so people can catch them. People go to the shore of CH for vacation and eat lunch. Chah Nime is beautiful and I recommend that you visit there someday. |
In my own opinion war is not necessary. In the history of Kiribati during Word WarII many people were die from Gun Shot. Few people were alive by their own rescue. Homes were destroyed, village during that day were messy and people were lying everywhere. It is a sad memory from our eldest. If I WERE that day I will already rescue myself and prepare my own attacked to kill as many as I could for the sake of my relatives. Therefore I strongly support that war is not a good way people in the past and today will not adapt it. |
In my own opinion, war is not necessary. In the history of Kiribati during World War II, many people died from gunshots. Few people were alive by their own self-protection. Homes were destroyed, villages during that day were messy and bodies were lying everywhere. It is a sad memory from our past. If I were there that day, I would have rescued myself and prepared my own attack to kill as many as I could for the sake of my relatives. Therefore, I strongly support that war is not a good way. People in the past and today should not adopt it. |
i remember coming home from school and got hit by a car and no one didnt know my family so people had to call the cops and i went to the hospital and got treat it and they call my grandmother i still remember like it was yesterday because i still see the man that hit me it wasnt important cause my grandma use to talk to him but know she gone i feel like if i didnt go between the cars i wouldnt gotten hit.but until today i have the scare on my legs. |
I remember coming home from school and getting hit by a car. No one knew my family, so people had to call the cops. I went to the hospital and got treated. They called my grandmother. I still remember it like it was yesterday because I still see the man that hit me. It wasn’t important because my grandma used to talk to him. Now that she is gone, I feel like if I hadn’t gone between the cars, I wouldn’t have gotten hit. Still today, I have the scar on my legs. |
Intermediate Writings
MY OLD HOUSE WAS LOCATED ON KOHAT ROAD.THAT HOUSE WAS HUGE
AND BEAUTIFUL AND HAD SEVEN ROOMS
AND A BIG LOUNGE AND CARPARK AND ALSO A LAWN.THAT HOUSE LOOKED VERY
AMAZING BECAUSE IT WAS HUGE |
My old house was located on Kohat Road. That house was huge and beautiful and had seven rooms and a big lounge, garage, and also a lawn. That house looked very amazing because it was huge and looked great because it had great people in it. It smelled caring and lovable because the people there were caring and loved everyone on that street. I remember a lot of memories of mine in that house, but I would like to share some of them, which were full of excitement. Once time, my family and I were sitting in the lounge at nighttime and the next day it was my birthday. We all were having ice cream and none of them were sleeping as they would wish me happy birthday at 12:00 sharp. As it turned midnight, I was going to my room, but suddenly, all my family members came rushing towards me: some with candles and some with balloons and a delicious chocolate cake. They all made loud wishes to me and hugged me and gave me pieces of cake and blasted all the balloons and gave me gifts in front of my room door. Now I miss my old home a lot. |
Last Sunday, the weather was sunny and windy. That was a
perfect day to go outside to enjoy the nature. I
and my family went to Vung Tau beach by car.
Before that day, my family were
busy to prepare: my
father was washing his car while mom was frying chicken for the trip. I and my sister prepared
clothes and stuff to go. |
Last Sunday, the weather was sunny
and windy. That was a perfect day to go outside to enjoy nature. My family and
I went to Vung Tau beach by car. Before that day, my
family was busy preparing: my father was washing his car while mom was frying
chicken for the trip. My sister and I prepared clothes and stuff to go. |
hi i'm from india. india is known for its population and its democratic goverment.india is 7th largest country in the world.so it have lot of sites that will provide different expericences.in northen part of india most of the places developed by the mughal and early rulers of india.especially taj mahal , taj mahal was built by mughal empier shajahan. taj mahal actually is a tomb for his beloved wife mumtaj. taj mahal took place in a 7 wonders of world . taj mahal is in agra on the banks of riveryamuna.it is knowns as symbhol of love in india |
Hi, I’m from India. India is known for its population and its democratic government. India is the 7th largest country in the world. So it has lots of sites that will provide different experiences. In the northern part of India, most of the places were developed by the Mughal Empire and early rulers of India, specifically the Taj Mahal. The Taj Mahal was built by the Mughal Empire Shajahan. The Taj Mahal actually is a tomb for his beloved wife, Mumtaj. Taj Mahal is one of the Seven Wonders of the World. The Taj Mahal is in Agra on the banks of the river Yamuna. It is known as a symbol of love in India. |
The best country to visit. |
I think I would prefer to
visit India rather than other countries. India is a big, vast country that
holds different cultures in it. There are various sites and places that we can
visit. Each one of them may indicate the culture of a different nation. In one
statement, we can say that India is the land of nations. |
"Don't leave the house or open the door for anyone!" Said mum before she went to town .I was seven years old by then, I could hardly get what she was saying because of the video game, some hours after mum had gone out I heard people screaming outside. I opened the windows to get a clear view of what was going on I saw kids of my age running,because of curiosity I decided to go out and check out what was going on . When I got out I found the biggest snake I had never seen in my entire life, while people were running I wanted to get a little more closer to see what this snake could do. Before I knew it the snake was all over me I couldn't run or breath, neither could I raise my hand nor move my legs. I could my legs getting into the snakes mouth .I suddenly lost conscious . When I wake up I saw mum setting besides me and a doctor I didn't want to ask what happened or how I managed to survive because I was scared of mum. The surprising part is that up now I don't know how I survived. |
"Don't leave the house or open the door for anyone!" said mum before she went to town. I was seven years old by then. I could hardly get what she was saying because of the video game. Some hours after mum had gone out, I heard people screaming outside. I opened the windows to get a clear view of what was going on. I saw kids of my age running. Because of curiosity, I decided to go out and check out what was going on. When I got out, I found the biggest snake I had ever seen in my entire life. While people were running, I wanted to get a little closer to see what this snake could do. Before I knew it, the snake was all over me. I couldn't run or breathe, neither could I raise my hand nor move my legs. I could feel my legs going into the snake's mouth. I suddenly lost consciousness. When I woke up, I saw mum and a doctor sitting beside me. I didn't want to ask what happened or how I managed to survive because I was scared of mum. The surprising part is that up until now, I don't know how I survived. |
I am 48 years old, and God has blessed me with a kind,
loving man whom I am
married to for the past 26years. |
I am 48 years old, and God has
blessed me with a kind, loving man whom I have been married to for the past 26
years. I am working as an Executive
Secretary with Airports Fiji Limited and have been working with this company
for 15 years. I love to sing and listen to Christian music and songs. I am an outdoor type of person and love to be working with my hands in the garden when I am not in the office. I am also a Sunday school teacher, and love to teach children about God's teaching's and his love for mankind. I am always eager to help anyone who asks for my help or those around me that need help either financially or spiritually. It gives me a lot of satisfaction and happiness to help. As mentioned earlier, I am always striving for the best and attempting this online exercise will greatly assist my daily work here at Airports Fiji Limited. |
For me, the best country to visit is Israel. Being a christian;
reading and studying the bible
is part of my growing up at home. So, i am very familiar
with places in Israel but have always dreamt to travel there one day. My dream came into
fruition when myself and
40 other ladies from my church wen on pilmgarage tour to Israel in September of 2012. |
For me, the best country to visit is Israel. Being a Christian, reading and studying the Bible is part of my growing up at home. So, I am very familiar with places in Israel but have always dreamt of traveling there one day. My dream came into fruition when 40 ladies from my church and I went on a pilgrimage tour of Israel in September of 2012. We left Fiji on the 21 of September and spent two weeks trotting the holy land. For me, stepping foot in Israel and traveling around for two weeks was like I was at home and at peace with my soul. It was such an amazing place, stepping foot on almost all the Biblical sites I could think of from Jerusalem, where we stayed, to two nights in Galilee and then to Jericho to swim in the Dead Sea. The desert was a vast and beautiful area that my naked eyes could not reach. It's an amazing place, although it is dry and there was no rain while we were there. However, there are plenty of kinds of fruits. I have never tasted such delicious grapes and apples than the ones I ate in Israel. I learned that their culture is similar to mine and I was so blessed that I visited that place. I would recommend a trip to Israel for any Christian or to anyone, for that matter. It is an amazing place with lots of sites to visit and with amazing people. For me, it's like home and I will definitely return. |
the most
important site to see in my home country is Bach Ma mountains. it is located on the
south of hue city, about 20 miles far. Bach Ma is famous
for wildlife. it was a
small aiport before that France used to serve in the army. now it is where to
preserve rare plants and animals. Do Quyen fall is the most beautiful view of bach ma. there are a lot of Do
Quyen flowers and rare birds there. hope you have a chance to visit here one time. |
The most important site to
see in my home country is Bach Ma mountains. It is located about 20 miles south
of Hue City. Bach Ma is famous for wildlife. It was a small airport before when
France used it to serve in the army. Now, it is where to preserve rare plants
and animals. Do Quyen Falls is the most beautiful view of Bach Ma. There are a
lot of Do Quyen flowers and rare birds there. I hope you have a chance to visit
here one time. |
One of the thing that I enjoy most
is to learn a new language. For me being able to communicate my ideas to others it is a fantastic way to
make a lot of friends. |
One of the things that I
enjoy most is to learn a new language. For me, being able to communicate my
ideas to others is a fantastic way to make a lot of friends. Knowing another
language besides my primary language has been a big challenge. My primary language
is Spanish and I try to improve my secondary language which is English. There
are many ways to learn other languages. One of them is listening to music,
another one is watching TV, and last but not least, watching Youtube videos. Finally, I have found that working in an
English speaking environment has helped me to improve my English. Therefore,
being involved with coworkers who are English speaking has been very effective
in my learning. |
I like to travel many countries as
much as possible. However
in my financial capability was not as strong to travel that much of country.
Fortunately I already had gone to the Singapore, that was my dream to
travel to see that country. Singapore was a very eye-catching and attractive
country. it was a
quite small and well developed country compared to other Asian countries.Singapore is an
independent country and Lee kuan
yaw was a prime minster until
2011. During his tenure, the country was boost in a very high level and also established an international
airline. Singapore also established excellent education system. people from all over the world has gone to Singapore to
get hire education
because the provide
quality education based on international standered. |
I like to travel to many
countries as much as possible. However, my financial capability is not strong
enough to travel to many countries. Fortunately, I have already gone to
Singapore. That was my dream to travel to see that country. Singapore was a very
eye-catching and attractive country. It was a quite small and well-developed
country compared to other Asian countries. Singapore is an independent country
and Lee Kuan Yaw was the prime minister until 2011. During his tenure, the
country was boosted to a very high level and also established an international
airline. Singapore also established an excellent education system. People from
all over the world have gone to Singapore to get higher education because they
provide quality education based on international standards. Singapore also has
very attractive places for sight-seeing such as Juroand Bird Park and the
Sentosa Resort. These are very beautiful and attractive places. I also went to
those places and took pictures. |
I plan to
retire in 2020, about five years from today. I came
from Taiwan and have worked and lived in Maryland for over 30 years. Thirty
years is a very long time and I miss my families
in Taiwan. I would like to move back to Taiwan when I retire because almost all
my families are there. I think I will be happier if I can live in the same city where my siblings live. I would cook and bake cakes and bread for them because I always like to do all these in the kitchen. A couple of my older siblings are getting old and became pretty ill these years, so I thought I should go home to take care of them as early as possible. |
I plan to
retire in 2020, about five years from today. I am from Taiwan and have worked
and lived in Maryland for over 30 years. Thirty years is a very long time and I
miss my family in Taiwan. I would like to move back to Taiwan when I retire
because almost all my family is there. I think I will be happier if I can
live in the same city where my siblings live. I would cook and bake cakes and
bread for them because I always like to work in the kitchen. A couple of my
older siblings are getting old and have become pretty ill recently, so I
thought I should go home to take care of them as soon as possible. |
First of all, I would like to introduce you I am a citizen of Pakistan.
Pakistan is situated in South Asia and very beautiful
country in this World. Pakistan has many important sites to see. Most
importantly, if we are talking about the North Areas of Pakistan are very beautiful and full of nature sceneries as well
as natural resources. Northern Areas of Pakistan spread over 72,496 Sq. Km are as fascinating as its southern region.
There many mountains with high peaks are
covered with snow and there heights vary
from 1000 m to 8000 meters. The culture, norms and traditions of this region is interesting. The people of this region have
typical costumes, folk dances, music and sports like polo and buzkashi, providing the traveler an unforgotten experience. Out of 14 over 8000 meters high peaks on
the earth, 4 occupy an amphitheater at the head of Baltoro
glacier in Karakoram range in Northern Pakistan. These are; K-2 or Godowin Austin (8611 m, world’s second highest),
Gasherbrum- I (8068 m), Broad Peak (8047 m) and Gasherbrum-II (8035 m). There
is another which is equally great, Nanga Parbat (8126 m) located at the western
end of the Himalayas. In addition to that there
are 68 peaks over 7000 m and hundreds others
of over 6000 meters. Swat Valley: The lush green valley of Swat is very attractive place in the Northern
Region having icy cold lakes, fruit laden orchards and flower decked slopes is ideal for traveler or holiday makers. It has a rich historical pas too because the Buddhist stupas and statues are found all over Swat Valley. Swat is
divided in three main areas, Saidu Sharif, Mingora and Kalam. Gilgit and Hunza Valleys: The Gilgit
is also a very beautiful place to see in the Northern Region due to its
outstanding beauty and having largest suspension
bridge in Asia (182 meters long and 2 meters wide) on the fast flowing Gilgit River. The Hunza is more beautiful place to visit due to the
fragrant breeze singing through graceful popular trees and the velvet like
green carpet of wheat fields, set against the background of snow covered
mountains. Chitral Valley and Kalash Valley: The Chitral
Valley is the favourite place for mountaineers,
anglers, hundtres,
hikers, naturalists and anthroplogists.
The Trichmir (7705 m)
the highest peak of the Hindukush range is
located in the area. The Kalash
Valley is the major attraction of Chitral known as Kafir-Kalash or Weareres of the Balck Robes. The Kalash people
are fun lovers who love music and
dancing particularly on occasion of their reglious festivals. |
First of all, I would like to introduce myself as a citizen of Pakistan. Pakistan is situated in South Asia and is a very beautiful country in this World. Pakistan has many important sites to see. Most importantly, if we are talking about the North Areas of Pakistan, they very beautiful and full of nature sceneries as well as natural resources. Northern Areas of Pakistan spread over 72,496 Sq. Km and are as fascinating as its southern region. There many mountains with high peaks that are covered with snow and their heights vary from 1000 m to 8000 meters. The culture, norms and traditions of this region are interesting. The people of this region have typical costumes, folk dances, music and sports like polo and buzkashi, providing the traveler an unforgettable experience. Out of 14 over 8000 meters high peaks on the earth, 4 occupy an amphitheater at the head of Baltoro glacier in Karakoram range in Northern Pakistan. These are; K-2 or Godowin Austin (8611 m, world’s second highest), Gasherbrum- I (8068 m), Broad Peak (8047 m) and Gasherbrum-II (8035 m). There is another which is equally great, Nanga Parbat (8126 m) located at the western end of the Himalayas. In addition to that, there are 68 peaks over 7000 m and hundreds of others of over 6000 meters. Swat Valley: The lush green valley of Swat is a very attractive place in the Northern Region having icy cold lakes, fruit laden orchards and flower decked slopes which are ideal for travelers or holiday makers. It has a rich historical past too because the Buddhist stupas and statues are found all over Swat Valley. Swat is divided in three main areas: Saidu Sharif, Mingora and Kalam. Gilgit and Hunza Valleys: The Gilgit is also a very beautiful place to see in the Northern Region due to its outstanding beauty and having the largest suspension bridge in Asia (182 meters long and 2 meters wide) on the fast flowing Gilgit River. The Hunza is a more beautiful place to visit due to the fragrant breeze singing through graceful popular trees and the velvet like green carpet of wheat fields, set against the background of snow covered mountains. Chitral Valley and Kalash Valley: The Chitral Valley is the favourite place for mountaineers, anglers, hunters, hikers, naturalists and anthropologists. The Trichmir, (7705 m) the highest peak of the Hindukush range, is located in the area. The Kalash Valley is the major attraction of Chitral known as Kafir-Kalash or Weareres of the Balck Robes. The Kalash people are fun people who love music and dancing particularly on occasion of their religious festivals. |
The article of sweatshirts
describes the injustice that happens in third world countries, where there are many
violations of human rights to
women and children. After the article was released to college students, the
outrageous news caused different reactions all over the campus. The response
was always the same to find a way to stop the unhuman treatment to people in third world countries. Now there are
some aspects that were highlighted such as children as young as eleven or
twelve years old are working ten or more hours every day. In Honduras local laws prohibit
anyone under the age of fourteen from doing factory work. There are
characteristics such as temperature that exceeds 100 degrees, no safe drink water, and they are
under paid. Fairness is
been violated. |
The article of sweatshirts
describes the injustice that happens in third world countries where there are
many violations of human rights of women and children. After the article was
released to college students, the outrageous news caused different reactions
all over the campus. The response was always the same to find a way to stop the
inhumane treatment of people in third world countries. Now there are some
aspects that were highlighted such as children as young as eleven or twelve
years old are working ten or more hours every day. In Honduras, local laws
prohibit anyone under the age of fourteen from doing factory work. There are
characteristics such as temperature that exceeds 100 degrees, no safe drinking
water, and they are under paid. Fairness has been violated. Children as young as
eleven years old are being forced to work ten hours a day or more. Children at
that age should be playing and making great memories about their childhood.
They should be at school learning something new that would help them be a
better person in the future. Children must know that they are the future of
their country. But if we keep buying products from companies that women and
children to work in inhumane conditions. They will never have the opportunity
to enjoy what it really means to be a kid. Equally important is to
say that women and children do not have adequate facilities that provide a safe
environment. Most or all of the factories where these women and children work
do not have safe sanitary standards. The temperatures in those factories exceed
100 degrees and there is no safe drinking water. Children are exposed to many
dangers that could be solved by simply not buying products from companies that
do not follow Universal Intellectual Standards. The comparison of living standards of two countries as Honduras and U.S is huge. In many poor countries around the world, entire families work every day to bring food to their table and Honduras is not the exception. Now, many people believe that children should not work. The situation in Honduras is very common in poor countries and there is not difference than farmers that have their kids working in the corn field driving tractors and being exposed to herbicides every day. In conclusion, stopping products coming from
Honduras will not change the situation in Honduras. We can buy products from a
company that matches the Universal Intellectual Standards, but as we switch
from one supplier to another, Honduras will do the same. |
The most exciting place in my country is the beach there are three hundred and sixty five beaches in my country of ANTIGUA. It is very beautiful and it is a fun place to be. There are a lot of coconut trees, sugar cane, Fruit trees, and Beautiful flowers. The roads are smooth and clean, the people are kind, loving, friendly and always ready and willing to help at all times. Every one who visited my country always come back for another visit. That is because it is so beautiful, and fun to see. The hills and valleys are so green and pretty in the day times. The crew ships are big and lovely there are a lot of people travel on the ships. When they come on land the street is full of tourist from all kind of islands. They eat and drink different kind of food and drinks. They love the kind of things they sells. It is very beautiful and i would like every one to come and see it some day. |
The most exciting place in my country is the beach. There are three hundred and sixty five beaches in my country of Antigua. It is very beautiful and it is a fun place to be. There are a lot of coconut trees, sugar cane, fruit trees, and beautiful flowers. The roads are smooth and clean, the people are kind, loving, friendly and always ready and willing to help at all times. Everyone who has visited my country always comes back for another visit. That is because it is so beautiful, and fun to see. The hills and valleys are so green and pretty in the daytime. The crew ships are big and lovely. There are a lot of people who travel on the ships. When they come on land, the street is full of tourists from all kinds of islands. They eat and drink different kinds of food and drinks. They love the kind of things they sell. It is very beautiful and I would like every one to come and see it some day. |
First of all, my perfect day was the February 28th. It was perfect day because I passed LEAP3. LEAP is Langara English for Academic Purpose. After I received my report card, I just went to home. I wanted to relax. Consquently, the February 28th, when I get the report card, was perfect day. Second, my perfect day was also February 28th. It was perfect day because my mom and brother were visited me. I was so excited because I didn't seen them since September. We walked near by my home. Consequently, the perfect day was the February 28th when my mom and brother came. |
First of all, my perfect day was February 28th. It was a perfect day because I passed LEAP3. LEAP is Langara English for Academic Purpose. After I received my report card, I just went home. I wanted to relax. Consquently, February 28th, when I got the report card, was a perfect day. It was a perfect day because my mom and brother visited me. I was so excited because I hadn.t seen them since September. We walked nearby my home. Consequently, the perfect day was the February 28th when my mom and brother came. |
To
whom it may concern: |
To
whom it may concern: |
Dear Hiring Manager, |
Dear Hiring Manager,  My name is _________. I am writing this letter in reference to the Retail Sales Women’s Apparel. I have an application on the _________ website for this job. I would like to know whether you received my application and if you have any thoughts about it.  I would like to work in your store because it’s very famous and has many different customers. I like to work with people and I am starting my career as a teacher. I have many skills to drive my overall sales through building and maintaining relationships with my costumers, developing my client base, providing product knowledge, and ensuring clients are called for events and the arrival of new merchandise.  I can work extensively with visual standards and marketing high-ticket pieces. Please take the time to consider my application. I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to meet with you personally to discuss what I have to bring to the position at _________ at this time.  My colleague, Monica, would offer you some information about me. She is a nice lady and referred me to this job. Regards, |
I will never forget that flying ten hours from Istanbul to New York. I
was initially excited about travelling on the Pacific Ocean, but within minutes, I felt
dizzy and weak. I spend the next hours in misery, counting the time until I
could get back on solid ground. After that I checked web sites for flying sickness to find some
information about how to deal with it. |
I will never forget flying ten hours from Istanbul to New York. I was initially excited about travelling over the Pacific Ocean, but within minutes, I felt dizzy and weak. I spend the next hours in misery, counting the time until I could get back on solid ground. After that I checked websites for flying sickness to find some information about how to deal with it. I found an article and it said taking medicine might help to get over motion sickness by causing sleepiness. While traveling, avoiding alcoholic beverages, high fat foods, and spices may prevent us from having motion sickness. I think next time, I will be prepared for it. |
Some people believe that go to college is not necessary. Nowadays, some may hold an opinion with agree with this statement, but some others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned that go to college is really important. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. |
Some people believe that going to college is not necessary. Nowadays, some may hold an opinion that agrees with this statement, but some others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, going to college is really important. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. |
Today, I will give you an instruction about me. I am a freshman. My name is Alias. I am a computer science engineer. |
Today, I will give you an introduction about me. I am a freshman. My name is Alias. I am a Computer Science Engineer. My hobbies are playing badminton and soccer. I study English at school about three hours every week. In addition, I study English by myself. I am living with my family. Currently, I am a single boy. Finally, I am from Thailand. Have a nice day! |
Hi my teacher and everybody. |
Hi my teacher and everybody. This is my first post. I recently found this site. Today, I will recount the best day of my life. It was a perfect day, like the topic’s name. It was the day that I made money by my own knowledge. I took $0.01 from Admob Advertisement System. I will become a developer in the future. Currently, I am a student in a university in Thailand. |
Stonehenge |
Stonehenge is a memorial of history. It is placed in English, near Viltshayer. This historical place remains from the bronze ear and, based on radiocarbon dating, its archaism reaches to 2000 or 3000 BC. Who knows exactly how Stonehenge was built? Big stones with a weight of 50 tons were pulled by groups of men over rollers. They were standing up, using rope, or if it was necessary, creating downhill dirt. Today, most big buildings in the world have secrets. Scientists and archeologists try to find these secrets. Experts believe that the big ring of stones is Stonehenge is a temple, like an astronomical place. You can travel to English and visit this scientific place. Also, you have an opportunity to learn English and enjoy both of them at the same time in this journey. |
Artemis temple is one of the seven strangest places in the world. This place was built in the current Turkey at 550 BC. The temple is near the Saljoq town, next to the historical places were called Efesos. |
The Artemis Temple is one of the seven strangest places in the world. This place was built in Turkey in 550 BC. The temple is near Saljoq, next to historical place which is called Efesos. Efesos is near Ezmir and their distance is about 50 km. This temple is one of the beautiful places that make the town a unique place. Qaroon, the king of Lidy, ordered Chersiphronv, a Greek architect, to build the temple. Decorations o the temple were bronze sculptures that were made by expert sculptors, such as Ploycleitus, Kresilas and Phradmon. Tourists, merchants, industrialists and kings came to the holy temple. They expressed their respects to the temple by bringing different gifts. Some of those gifts, such as rings, bracelets, and necklaces, were found by archaeologists. You can visit the holy temple and make lasting memories by traveling to Turkey. |
My dad is my hero. He has a great influence on my life. He is a special person and he is realy diffrent. His character is unique . Not only he has a great influence on me but also on all people around him. My dad is a kind, honest, respectable and smart man. He is a positive, optimistic and cheerful person. He loves God very much. He prays all the prayers on time and follows God's orders very well. My dad is a very successful person in his work and in his life . In his work , he gains alot of presents , and all his friends respect him . His manager appreciates his work and his personality. For the family, all the members of the family really love my dad as he is good to them. He treats them well and stands beside them in their good and difficult times. My dad is a hero because really i want to be like him . I admire him and i admire the way he lives his life. He works hard to satisfy God and at the same time he is succesful in his work besides, his good relations with all the members of the family. |
My dad is my hero. He has a great influence on my life. He is a special person and he is really different. His character is unique. Not only does he have a great influence on me, but also on all the people around him. My dad is a kind, honest, respectable and smart man. He is a positive, optimistic and cheerful person. He loves God very much. He prays all the time and follows God.s orders very well. My dad is a very successful person in his work and in his life. In his work, he receives a lot of presents, and all his friends respect him. His manager appreciates his work and his personality. All the members of the family really love my dad and he is good to them. He treats them well and stands beside them in their good and difficult times. My dad is a hero because I really want to be like him. I admire him and I admire the way he lives his life. He works hard to satisfy God and, at the same time, he is successful in his work. Besides these reasons, he has good relationships with all the members of the family. |
I am Gunasekaran living in Chennai. We are four, my mom, wife and my new born baby. My last year birthday was my favorite one. It was the first birthday which I celebrated with my wife because one month before only we got engaged. So it is very special not only for me but also for my wife. We celebrated my birthday in my office with my colleagues and friends. So it is always ever green moment in my life. After the cake cutting, we went for hotel and spent more than an hour and talked a lot. Generally before marriage, a girl cannot come to her husband’s home. Personally I feel shy to her home. So we both confused about where we could celebrate. We were not aware that my colleagues and friends were arranged to celebrate my birthday in the office. So it was pleasant surprise for me. I would like to thank them those who were made the arrangement to my birthday. I never forget this moment in my life time. |
My name is Gunasekaran and I live in Chennai. There are four people in my family: my mom, my wife, my newborn baby and me. My birthday last year was my favorite one. It was the first birthday which I celebrated with my wife because only one moth before that we got engaged. So, it was very special, not only for me, but also for my wife. We celebrated my birthday in my office with my colleagues and friends. So it will always be a cherished memory in my life. After the cake cutting, we went to the hotel and spent an hour talking. Generally before marriage, a girl cannot come to her future-husband’s home. Personally, I felt shy to go to her home. So, we were both confused about where we could celebrate. We were not aware that my colleagues and friends were arranging a celebration for my birthday at the office. It was a pleasant surprise for me. I would like to thank those who made the arrangements for my birthday. I will never forget this moment in my lifetime. |
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I had a very different Thanksgiving holiday in 2014. I live
by myself in Maryland and usually just go to my friend's home for Thanksgiving.
In 2014, I decided to have the
Thanksgiving with my sisters in California. |
I had a very different Thanksgiving holiday in 2014. I live
by myself in Maryland and usually just go to my friend's home for Thanksgiving.
In 2014, I decided to have Thanksgiving with my sisters in California. |
Babak Castle |
The Babak castle is near Kalibar, about 3 km above a mountain with a height of 2300 meters. The castle was built in the Sasanian period. Its name comes from Babak Khoramdin, the leader of anti Arabic aggression in 893 AD. When we go to the castle, we should go across a passageway. This way is like a tunnel, and at one time, only one person can pass through it. The passageway is in front of the castle and their distance is about 200 m. Two towers are around the pass. The building of the tower has two and three floors and its place is after the entrance. When you enter the original hall, you can see seven rooms placed around it. In the west area of the castle, there are sources of water and technical installations. This place is very strange and I suggest you visit it and enjoy this beautiful place. Hopefully you will have good weather. |
Acrilamide is a synthetic compound that uses especially as a polymer precursor (polyacrylamide) for example it uses in waste water treatment, paper and packaging industries. For the first time, in April 2002, acrylamide was reported in carbohydrate-rich fried foods such as potato chips, French-fries, biscuits, bread and coffee, by the Swedish National Food Administration and University of Stockholm . |
Acrilamide is a synthetic compound that is used especially as a polymer precursor (polyacrylamide). For example, it used in wastewater treatment, paper and packaging industries. For the first time, in April 2002, acrylamide was reported in carbohydrate-rich fried foods such as potato chips, french-fries, biscuits, bread and coffee by the Swedish |
Parsley, coriander and dill are three edible vegetables that widely use in the world as flavoring agent in food products, perfume and cosmetic industries as well as pharmaceutical industries. |
Parsley, coriander and dill are three edible vegetables that are widely used in the world as a flavoring agent in food products, perfume and cosmetic industries as well as pharmaceutical industries. |
Cardaria is an edible herb
traditionally used as medical care of liver-spleen disorders, effective in the treatment of insect
bites, fat and blood sugar. |
Cardaria is an edible herb traditionally used as medical care for liver-spleen disorders, effective in the treatment of insect bites, fat and blood sugar. |
The first electric cars were produced in the late 19th
century to solve the problem of air pollution in London. Mass production of cheaper gasoline vehicles
led to a decline in the use of electric vehicles in the 20th century. |
The first electric cars were produced in the late 19th century to solve the problem of air pollution in London. Mass production of vehicles which use cheaper gasoline led to a decline in the use of electric vehicles in the 20th century. |
Last year, most cities in Turkey had protesters against the
president of Turkey. Initially, demonstrators got together to protest the urban
development plan for Istanbul's Taksim Gezi Park. The park was attacked with
tear gas and water cannons by police. The subject of the protests then
broadened beyond the development into wider anti government demonstration. The
protests also spread to other cities in Turkey. Protesters were more than
students and intellectuals. They were described as secular, religious, young,
old, soccer hooligans,communist,
nationalist, gays,
and feminist and all were taking to the streets to register their
displeasure. |
Last year, most cities in Turkey had protesters against the president of Turkey. Initially, demonstrators got together to protest the urban development plan for Istanbul's Taksim Gezi Park. The park was attacked with tear gas and water cannons by police. The subject of the protests then broadened beyond the development into wider anti government demonstrations. The protests also spread to other cities in Turkey. Protesters were more than students and intellectuals. They were described as secular, religious, young, old, soccer hooligans, communists, nationalists, gays, and feminist and all were taking to the streets to register their displeasure. |
My name is Lisa and I am from
Taiwan. I immigrated to the U.S. about 30 some years ago after my husband had
received his master’s degree in computer science at Georgia Tech in
Atlanta. We moved to Washington D.C. after my husband had landed his first job
after his graduation. We have lived in a suburban area in Maryland since then. I have worked as export/import licensing officer in a federal
government agency for about 15 years and have always felt worried about my
insufficient English ability when performing my jobs.
I spend a great deal of time on learning English every day, including listening
to the radio and reading news online, but the
improvement is very slow. I happened to see this website
today, and would like to try if this is
a good opportunity for me to improve my English. |
My name is Lisa and I am from Taiwan. I immigrated to the U.S. about 30 some years ago after my husband had received his master’s degree in computer science at Georgia Tech in Atlanta. We moved to Washington D.C. after my husband had landed his first job after his graduation. We have lived in a suburban area in Maryland since then. I have worked as an export/import licensing officer in a federal government agency for about 15 years and have always felt worried about my insufficient English ability when performing my job. I spend a great deal of time on learning English every day, including listening to the radio and reading news online, but my improvement is very slow. I happened to see this website today, and would like to see if this is a good opportunity for me to improve my English. |
We moved
from Atlanta to Maryland when my husband landed his first job after he had
graduated from Georgia Tech in Atlanta. We rented a one-bed room apartment for the first two years
of living in Maryland. I was not working when we first moved to Maryland
because I did not have a green card, a permanent resident card that allows an alien to work in the U.S.
legally. One day I
received a phone call from a sales representative who was working for a housing
builder. He told me that they had some newly built single houses for sale for a very low price.
I took the phone conversation seriously, discussed with my husband, and started
considering the feasibility of owning a house. Eventually we purchased our first house in the
U.S. with a small down
payment which I had saved for five years when I was in Taiwan. |
We moved
from Atlanta to Maryland when my husband landed his first job after he had
graduated from Georgia Tech in Atlanta. We rented a one-bedroom apartment for
the first two years of living in Maryland. I was not working when we first
moved to Maryland because I did not have a green card, a permanent resident
card that allows a foreigner to work in the U.S. legally. One day, I received a
phone call from a sales representative who was working for a housing builder.
He told me that they had some newly built, single houses for sale for a very
low price. I took the phone conversation seriously, discussed with my husband,
and started considering the feasibility of owning a house. Eventually, we
purchased our first house in the U.S. with a small down payment, which I had
saved for five years when I was in Taiwan. |
How to be financially responsibly |
How to be financially responsible: |
We purchased our first house in Gaithersburg, Maryland when
my husband landed his first job after he had graduated from Georgia Tech in
Atlanta. There was no furniture came with the house except a refrigerator since it was a brand
new house. It had four bed
rooms, one and a half bath,
and lots of window. |
We purchased our first house in Gaithersburg, Maryland when
my husband landed his first job after he had graduated from Georgia Tech in
Atlanta. There was no furniture that came with the house except a refrigerator
since it was a brand new house. It had four bedrooms, one and a half baths, and
lots of window. |